I’ve made quite a few changes throughout the manuscript in the last week or so. I’ll update all of the chapters as soon as I get some more free time. Summer classes are over, so I should have a little more time to write now. I’ve changed a lot within the first three chapters and have changed a few names throughout.
As far as new work goes, I’ve finished chapter fourteen and you can read it here.
As always, any feedback is appreciated. With any luck at all, I’ll have some more for you to read very soon.